I think the idea could work with this...but the font isn't quite right and the leaf is overwhelming. However, the idea of the "L" and "Y" standing out is something worth pursuing..
drhawkins wrote 3 months ago
with reference to entry #24
:
#20 - This is interesting; it'd be nice to see more integration of the shapes with the letters. As it stands, it seems like the lighter purple adornment is just sort of 'slapped' on over the letters. The level of subtlety is spot on, but there needs to be more integration overall.
#21, @22 - Something about these designs seem to make them 'flat'. There's not enough polish...maybe its the coloration? (Kind of too light)
#23 - Like the gradient, do not like the leaf. Inching closer to what I'm after though
#24 - Like the way the coloration looks on the letters, but the "i"'s aren't really working here.
Thanks for all the entries
drhawkins wrote 3 months ago
with reference to entry #36
:
Let me know if you like to see it in the purple colors.
#55 - Like the ribbon, but the font seems a little too 'stark'. Overall, I like it but I'd like to see it with a slightly more elegant font. Thanks.
#56 and #57 - The rocks are much too overbearing; I'm not looking for an image based logo. Thanks.
#59 - Very creative, but the face and butterfly images aren't really what I'm looking for. If you're going to integrate some sort of image or theme into the font (which I think you did very creatively here) I need it to be more subtle.
#61 - Like the font, would like the color to be darker. The heart is a no-go. Thanks.
#68 - This is simple and clean, I like the level of subtlety but I don't like the font inside. Thanks
This will likely be my last comment/critique since the competition ends in a little more than 12 hours. In advance, I'd like to still encourage any new submissions (for all of the night owls out there) because I've yet to make a decision.
#80 - I like the potential for this design, but I think overall it's not as subtle as it needs to be. I think the purple would be better if it were darker
#81, #83, #84 - Again, like the direction this is going but I'm still not a fan of the font...an improvement over last time though
Thanks everyone,
Brenda
denykris wrote 3 months ago
with reference to entry #88
:
I've changed the font, hopefully this can make the judgment. Thank You. :)
denykris wrote 3 months ago
with reference to entry #89
:
I've changed the font, hopefully this can make the judgment. Thank You. :)
denykris wrote 3 months ago
with reference to entry #90
:
Here is the logo that I have made with a different font. May be your concern. Thank you. :)
denykris wrote 3 months ago
with reference to entry #91
:
Here is the logo that I have made with a different font. May be your concern. Thank you. :)
Comments (33)
First Idea.
Started out with something simple, yet elegant. Something that would catch my eye in skin care products. Feedback would be very appreciated.
Contest Holder
Hi everyone, sorry for the delay in comments. The entries are looking good so far, let me give some guidance:
Overall, in terms of the level of simplicity, we're on track. A little more detail would be acceptable, and might work well too.
What stands out so far?
#6, #8, #14, #14
Honorable mention:
#1, but the flower is a little too much.
Check back tomorrow for more feedback.
Thanks
Contest Holder
#12 and #13
Appreciate the entries, but the flowers are too much.
Contest Holder
#11
This isn't really the theme/styled nuance that I have in mind.
Thanks
Contest Holder
#18
I think the idea could work with this...but the font isn't quite right and the leaf is overwhelming. However, the idea of the "L" and "Y" standing out is something worth pursuing..
Feedback is helpful.
Contest Holder
#20 - This is interesting; it'd be nice to see more integration of the shapes with the letters. As it stands, it seems like the lighter purple adornment is just sort of 'slapped' on over the letters. The level of subtlety is spot on, but there needs to be more integration overall.
#21, @22 - Something about these designs seem to make them 'flat'. There's not enough polish...maybe its the coloration? (Kind of too light)
#23 - Like the gradient, do not like the leaf. Inching closer to what I'm after though
#24 - Like the way the coloration looks on the letters, but the "i"'s aren't really working here.
Thanks for all the entries
Let me know if you like to see it in the purple colors.
Contest Holder
In regard to #36 - It's too subtle, overall. The leaves aren't really an appropriate theme, especially if they're green.
#37 - Like the font, on the right track. Do not like the mortar and pestle.
#34 - Big improvement over last similar entry. Getting closer.
#28 -#32: The designs overpower the text. I like #31 the best.
Thanks everyone.
Withdrawing due to site not paying designers.
NOTICE. I I HAVE TAKEN MY MONEY. I WIN A CONTEST A FEW DAYS BEFORE THAN YOU... AND ¡¡¡¡YES!!!! I HAVE TAKEN MY MONEY.
Contest Holder
****Please keep comments relevant to this contest. Thanks.*****
#42 - I think we're looking for something more "organic" in nature.
first submission, feedback welcome thank you!
Contest Holder
Hi everyone. Good news, the entries look like they're improving and getting much closer to what I'm looking for as a winner!
Specific comments:
#46, #47 and #52 are the closest to fitting the design brief, so far. Good designs.
In regard to #53, it needs something to "pull" it together... Some nice elements to it, but lacking in "togetherness"
wider ribbon
submission 2, all work is original and vector, feedback welcome, thank you
Give me comments please.
Feedback welcomed.
Simple, clean. As you wish, I hope this is a consideration for you. Thank you. :)
Contest Holder
#55 - Like the ribbon, but the font seems a little too 'stark'. Overall, I like it but I'd like to see it with a slightly more elegant font. Thanks.
#56 and #57 - The rocks are much too overbearing; I'm not looking for an image based logo. Thanks.
#59 - Very creative, but the face and butterfly images aren't really what I'm looking for. If you're going to integrate some sort of image or theme into the font (which I think you did very creatively here) I need it to be more subtle.
#61 - Like the font, would like the color to be darker. The heart is a no-go. Thanks.
#68 - This is simple and clean, I like the level of subtlety but I don't like the font inside. Thanks
clean and simple. feedback welcome, thanks
Contest Holder
#72 - This is better than last submission. Like the coloration. Much closer
#71 - I'm not liking the font
#69 - Nice font
Feedback welcomed.
I've changed the font to a more elegant. :)
This another design from me, you may be a consideration. Feedback welcome. Thank You
This another design from me. Thank You. :)
Contest Holder
This will likely be my last comment/critique since the competition ends in a little more than 12 hours. In advance, I'd like to still encourage any new submissions (for all of the night owls out there) because I've yet to make a decision.
#80 - I like the potential for this design, but I think overall it's not as subtle as it needs to be. I think the purple would be better if it were darker
#81, #83, #84 - Again, like the direction this is going but I'm still not a fan of the font...an improvement over last time though
Thanks everyone,
Brenda
I've changed the font, hopefully this can make the judgment. Thank You. :)
I've changed the font, hopefully this can make the judgment. Thank You. :)
Here is the logo that I have made with a different font. May be your concern. Thank you. :)
Here is the logo that I have made with a different font. May be your concern. Thank you. :)
Contest Holder
Hi everyone,
A decision will be made shortly. Thanks,