#1 i like the simpleness of things but it really doenst look like a phoenix
#3 could you try to make thinner lines? and maybe shade them a little
#4&5 firstly its Burn And Rise , not Rise And Burn ;) i like the style but also here thinner if possible and definitively a pure black background without any writing. please leave out all the writing , i will do that myself. maybe also have a look without the grey shadow.
all in all i like what i see but im kinda missing the thin lines and the gloomy atmosphere from my sample pic.
thanks leonlukasplum, just tweak the wings a little and that should do it.
#14 completely black backround and no writing please, im really only looking for the phoenix. and could you give it more shape? to make out wings and tail a little more .i actually like the flaming buis.
@ Qubiless:i like 11, 8 and 7 but could you maybe try and get a side view.at the moment its like we are looking on it from below it
#14 could you try to let the flames of the head morph into the ones from the body a little smoother, at the moment the head or rather the flames of the head look a little apart
@swim1987 i like #17 he most, but i really dont understand whats so hard about not putting any writing in. its slightly too round for me. is it possible tomake it more edgy like the sample pic?
@jpa eventhough i originaly said i dont want flames etc i like #19 the most so far. slighty thinner body would be cool though, slightly bigger/longer wings and maybe a the tail a little longer. i love the head.
@ALL please read the SUMMARY, edgy ( straight lines), gloomy, no writing etc etc...
@jpa almost there, i really liked the red outline on #19 could you put that on #20? and could you also try to get rid of the outter red glow? maybe to wings a little more spread and a thinner upper body ? ;)
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